DST? I'm having trouble remembering what this stands for. If it is anything similar to brain fog and it's similar condition, Lyme brain, then I understand perfectly.
I am glad that they are successful in describing the condition well. It is hard sometimes to call a poem that describes or deals with harder issues lovely, but sometimes they are. Sometimes the word choice, phrasing and structure create a beautiful frame around a harsh reality or condition.
To me this two are tired poems. Not stunning works of art, but a good reflection of this state. They are frank and honest. And I like to think that there is beauty in that.
Thank you so much for your review. You kind words are very appreciated.
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Date: 2013-03-11 02:44 am (UTC)DST? I'm having trouble remembering what this stands for. If it is anything similar to brain fog and it's similar condition, Lyme brain, then I understand perfectly.
I am glad that they are successful in describing the condition well. It is hard sometimes to call a poem that describes or deals with harder issues lovely, but sometimes they are. Sometimes the word choice, phrasing and structure create a beautiful frame around a harsh reality or condition.
To me this two are tired poems. Not stunning works of art, but a good reflection of this state. They are frank and honest. And I like to think that there is beauty in that.
Thank you so much for your review. You kind words are very appreciated.