Poem: Untitled (suggestions for title welcome)

I have had a dreadful time focusing on the things I need to be doing today and haven't been able to completely formulate my next post poetree (though it's partly there and will be up sometime tomorrow afternoon/evening). So I decided to take a break and try answering this week's Climbing the Poet's Tree writing challenge. There is a challenge for readers as well, and prizes are available for both writing and reading challenges. As a comm admin, I'm not eligble to win, but it sure is fun participating. I highly encourage folks to check it out. It's lots of fun, and you do not have to be a dreamwidth user to participate. This weeks writer's challenge is to write one of three forms introduced on the comm last week, a cinquain, an etheree, or a triquint. I chose to try my hand an an etheree. It's untitled, and title suggests are welcome. Concrit is also appreciated and welcome. This is my first time trying out this format. I recommend playing with it, it's fun to write.

Untitled Etheree

Drag
beyond
comfort zones
set worldviews on
edge erase gender
boundaries blur the lines
in our heads transcend too tight
categories transform ourselves
no more hatred no more fear let us
live free beyond your tags let me be me

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