Thank you for sharing this. I love the way you've used multiple meanings of the word 'bar' here.. I think the fourth stanza connects in well with the third. I'm not as sure about the last one, but it ends the poem on a hopeful note and I like that.
I've just realised that you are probably driving out now, so you may not see this in time. But good luck! I will be thinking of you.
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Date: 2014-02-24 11:12 pm (UTC)I've just realised that you are probably driving out now, so you may not see this in time. But good luck! I will be thinking of you.