Awww, this was very sweet. I do like the other poem more, because I think the poem is a stronger fit for what you're expressing, but this is lovely too. It makes a good counterpoint. ^-^ And it's nice to read the two poems in tandem like I did. I think that offers up some wonderful things to think about. ^-^
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Date: 2012-05-02 12:12 pm (UTC)