Ooooh. That's a really nice format for this poem. ^-^ And apparently I'm still stuck in "give really short feedback" mode. :/ But I do like this. I like the way it builds up and the way the lines work with it. It's got a lovely stacato effect at the beginning and then it branches out into something a bit more fluid. It's a really lovely effect.
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Date: 2012-05-02 12:09 pm (UTC)And the sentiment is such a powerful one. <3